Saturday, September 5, 2015

Would You Hug Me Innocently? Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the roses wait for the kiss of the dew,
when the first rays of the sun
touch the tiny beaks of the singing bird,
when in my soft smiling lips
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Susheela Shiju 09 November 2018

beautifully penned dear Tony! falling short of words! 10++++

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Sranisha Francis 18 September 2015

would you hug me innocently and give me a soft kiss Oh, Ya. soft kiss can be only from the Lord alone.

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Chandini Jaswal 16 September 2015

Beautiful poem depicting the innocence of a child!

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Shelma Zacharia 12 September 2015

lovely poem . it is also a poem of innocent love. sooo fine

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Sanjukta Nag 07 September 2015

Beautiful emotion is overflowing from the poem.. and lovely imagery. loved it

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Lorraine Colon 06 September 2015

A tender pleading for just a hug - an innocent expression of our dependency upon each other to find completeness and satisfaction in our lives. A beautifully expressed poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 September 2015

Lovely imagery and a lovely poem indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2015

Thrilling expression beginning with heart-touching introduction like.....When the roses wait for the kiss of the dew, .....you see thousand little stars hiding in my soul. marvellous poem. ..... 10

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Amitava Sur 06 September 2015

A lovely innocent confession of soul yearning love with a warm hug.

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Cigeng Zhang 05 September 2015

Soft and beautiful.

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