Thursday, May 22, 2008

..Would You? ? (H) Comments

Rating: 4.0

if i told you i love you..
what will you do?

would you return my love..
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Dislocated Heart
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Sunset moonshine 22 December 2008

hey, this poem is really deep n' i like it... it sounds like the stuff going on in my life right now.... LOL! ! ! *(! _!) *

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

this is wow... I really really like this. incredible! ! ! so very sweet.you did a fantastic job with this. Becca

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Very nice! It's one of the most beautiful writes I have ever read. Keep it up my friend. Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Maya Robena 28 August 2008

One Word, Beautiful... (enough said) ->ps.good job! its really sweet

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Bethany M. 12 July 2008

nice poem, I really like it, it has a... well... a feeling inside it. but yeah anyway. very nice!

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Allysyn Bryant 23 May 2008

If I was her, I would....

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Angie Melby 23 May 2008

Oh my god dang your hella talented i got one question do you need insperation or do your poems just come to you?

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Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2008

Poem shows a lot of feelings

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