Would You Do Me A Favour? Comments

in meghdootam the great poet kalidas has referred the cloud as messenger. a great write indeed.

i don't believe i can say anything better than some previous comments have already said. thanks to the poet and to the translator! ! ! bri thanks for sharing.

This degree of good will is something we should all strive to attain. A charitable heart, like yours, cannot help but show love Well done, Shahzia! .

Great write! ! ! I can relate with that feeling! ! !

once again you've done it ma'm. You have aroused my deep feelings: (mein nay ye jana k goya ye bhi mere dil mein hai) ...........great. superb....fantastic

..wow Shazia! ! ! ! ..you write like Gibran....please accept my salam for this awesome piece of writing... ..and please keep writing.. :)

flow is a marked feature of your work in both the languages!

Reading this translation of your urdu poem gives me the same feeling and pleasure. A poem from the heart.

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Your salam will be around with us in each flowing time, have no worry even in silence or quietness_Soul

such a benign wish, , so nicely said in this lovely poem, am sure the Traveler shall oblige the poetess :)