Thursday, December 8, 2016

Would You Dance With Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

At the back of my mind,
I got you dancing with me.
With strong gentle arms that
Caresses not my being but my soul.
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Minerva Agriam
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Jaya Das 31 December 2016

beautiful poem...full of fantasies...ahhh when reality turns harsh..sometimes its good to enjoy the pleasure of fantasy! ! !

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Sylvaonyema Uba 12 December 2016

A nice poem with imaginative explosion! Thanks for sharing with us! Sylva Onyema Uba

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2016

Hi Minerva, Marvelous! In the dream, you have his ....strong gentle arms that Caresses not my being but my soul. That is where true love manifests itself... Then, As the music fades, My heart was peaceful and serene; And Then I found myself suddenly alone, Enclosed in my four walled room; With nothing but myself no Sign of your presence. Minerva, it was really a wonderful experience; your poem holds me in a trance, as if I were in my younger days, when I was in love... and we dreamed and dreamed.... Great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+

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