Would You? Comments

I see a girl who is wanting to be accepted. She's afraid she isn't going to be good enough for the guy of her dreams. Why did the guy leave in the first place? After being hurt it's hard to open u, but it comes with time and maturity. I hope the girl in this poem finds fulfillment in life. Great work keep it up.10

A lot of Free Verse. If anything, all your poems so far have been Free verse. I was wondering, do you ever rhyme or have considering rhyming?

if he madly loves u that u r his life & soul so he won't see anyone but u for love is blind. if he loves u that much i'm sure he will do all what u said but when he does all of this be sure dear that he's not a human but an angel.

another passionate piece... let me know when u post more and i will be more than happy to read an comment..... thanks 4 sharing.

I would do all these things with you and some of them you wouldn't have to do.

the poem is nice but for me, it would be much better if you will divide them in verses

sure i do.. even i didn`t stop loving you.. you were and still so deep inside my heart.. no need to ask me.. because you are into heart.. so amazing and great penned.. thx for sharing.. hazem al..

No one shall say no 2 a young n smart poetess.....nice piece written from heart

What would you do when you fall for someone.Definitely a what you have described in here.Keep on writing dear.

You will find the one who is perfect for you when the answer is undoubtfully yes

a question that the only answer is from the soul mate.... well expressed thoughts and well presented...good write...

nice poem.reviling the inner thoughts which most times are never spoken...