Sunday, February 4, 2007

Would That My Love Were Magic Comments

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Would that my love were magic
I would take away your pain.
Would that my love were magic
You would run, laugh, dance, sing,
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Bonnie Lundgren 13 February 2010

Love does do these things. Haven't you seen it at work?

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Katherine Wiley 26 May 2008

Dorothy-this poem is magical, I love your wording and the atmosphere you have conjured. Lovely poem. kate

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 March 2008

'Love's magic is found only In the hearts of lovers and writer's pens' beautiful..., thanks for sharing

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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