Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Would It Really Matter Comments

Rating: 4.5

Would it really matter if we didn't get up today.
Didn't go to work and just stayed home to play.
If we just stood idly by and left the work undone
Cast away the chores and just went and had some fun.
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Mark Dillon
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Howard Savage 10 January 2016

You would be surprised to know yes it does matter. Everyday above ground is a good day.

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Neela Nath Das 18 August 2014

Congratulations! Really it deserves to be a Member Poem.

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it would be nice to just go do something fun without a care in the world..love the idea and good poem..

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it would be nice to just go do something fun without a care in the world..love the idea and good poem..

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Valerie Dohren 18 August 2014

Sounds good to me, the work ethic needs a little reconsidering methinks - but then there are those bills to pay! Very good Mark, well said.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2014

very beautiful, let our hair down and laugh..

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Stephen W 18 August 2014

Well done indeed. Welcome to the Lazy Bones Revolution!

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Paul Reed 18 August 2014

Enjoyed the poetry and the message

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Lyn Paul 18 August 2014

Great work Mark twice POD. Maybe this is telling Employers to G o easy on us poor hard workers.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 18 August 2013

I simply loved this poem! That's what I am going to do tomorrow...Spend tomorrow just lazing around, enjoying myself...instead of rushing to office in a crowded metro on a Monday morning and getting back with strained nerves and an exhausted body

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Pranab K Chakraborty 18 August 2013

Title first touch me to add a more sentence with this writing.....nothing would really be any matter if the earth stops its movement just this very moment................ And finally my comment is, its a nice poem by its approach, its used lucid words and the style of catching readers attention..... Nice.

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 August 2013

Beautiful poem...Loved reading it.

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Lyn Paul 18 August 2013

Well deserved Mark a great write. For this I grant you tomorrow off.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 August 2013

congratulations Mark Dillon..I am happy to see you here..Keep it up..

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Princess Lilypad 18 August 2013

I stand by no verse form, four line verse, free flow, rap, whatever. I thought it was said in fine form and of worthy subject matter. good job.

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Ruth Walters 29 October 2012

We're the worker bees, the drones and the 'queens' are the monied who don't have to work, however we hold power because without us the 'queens' would come unstuck, not just because they'd have no money, but because they'd have no food, no electricity or gas, no medical staff, no post, no cars, as we all know that these have to be made or brought in somehow, provided by the people for the people. Let's take our hats off to the little people, the worker bees!

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Heather Wilson 31 August 2012

You let off steam Mark, don`t finish up a wreck, loved your poem.

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Wonderful. Yes. Your poems will really matter. Some more without slaying. Kudos!

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Leslie Philibert 18 August 2012

A fine poem that deserves all the good reviews. It might have been better to stick to a four line verse form in the third and fourth verses, but that`s just my personal opinion, and the most important is that you transported your message with poetic skill, good write.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 18 August 2012

Again hears the voice of genius ancestors. Nothing would be matter if we go back to our life based on nature. And the contrast of life reveals well by words. If anyone get opportunity to live without his mechanical dailiness, the poet would have ti write the reverse. Actually human soul can not bear monotony at a stretch. Nice....Pranab k c

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