Would It! Memory Fails…1510** Comments

We have many candles of desire that are snuffed by the winds of Time. An admirable adaptation from a well-known poet.

Account oh not! yon fleeting seasons. Of days; lived, suffered, past reasons. Beautiful and impressive lines! They make one take a walk down memeory lane. Thanks for sharing.

it is deep and graceful thought............and you are our great medical personel who has tender heart

You're getting better and better in rhyme, rhythm and content. Indeed Ahmed Faraz was a very good contemprary urdu poet, a beautiful piece!

great theme and stunningly written piece! ! !

gracious to read............................

Fantastic as usual....last four lines are logically true