Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Would Be Better Comments

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I think it would be better if I died
Perhaps I'd be happier then
Everyone satisfied knowing
I held out to the bitter end
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Jane Dylan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

There is no need to die. The moment of unhappiness will not last for long time and sorrow will go away. Happiness will come within mind and glitter of joy will bloom. There is no need to fear. Life is cheerful to feel. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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