Thursday, October 6, 2011

Worthless Breath Comments

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Let me slide my fingers, in between the gaps of yours.
Clutch your hand as if we're about to do a leap of faith.
A risk that only two inseparable lovers would take.
We do not know where this fall will take us.
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Rachel Henley
breathe
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Eric Cockrell 06 October 2011

the magical power of love! good poem!

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Stefanie Fontker 06 October 2011

The first two lines of the second stanza are by far my favourites. Beautiful writing, you have created such a great piece of art.

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Rachel Henley

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