Worthless...? Comments

lydia beautiful poem.. i loved it.. it was so vivid.. so much sad emotion..like something i will write! ! ! lanesha J

You have one typo Lydia, a 'my' instead of a me. Other than that, go fishing, there are tons of fish in the sea and every experience along the way, will strengthen your breast stroke. Swimming is good for the body and soul. 9 from Tai, not that I know! I can't even doggy paddle! lol

a beautiful poem sincere touching painful but only partly true because even if you feel far from heaven's grace the grace remains and waits ever patient for your return good work