Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Worth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Worth

I was undressed to the core;
Shattered conscience, not confident anymore.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Danny H 25 July 2009

now I really enjoyed reading this one. very inspiring yet deadly. yet positive

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Ken E Hall 24 July 2009

well written poem here only one way up when your down good verse ++++++++10 regards

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Fay Slimm 23 July 2009

Like the phrasing and the flow in this terse but appealing piece.....10 + + Fay

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

Very true, dear! But, the debatable point is of stones being thrown or fruits inspiring people to do the same? /? Think about it, nikunj! !

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Lady Grace 22 July 2009

'no stone is thrown in a fruitless tree''..absolutely right..dozens of salutes dear...

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 July 2009

inspiring... a write flowing with positive outlook in life... expressive with strength of spirit.. very nice 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Ency Bearis 22 July 2009

discernment well expressed....nice theme to ponder...good write

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Deborah Cromer 22 July 2009

Very good! Reading other's comments too on your new works, sounds like it's going in the right direction. Good job. Very nice. Feels good huh? :) DC

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C. P. Sharma 22 July 2009

Worthy bounce back. Don't step back. CP

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2009

no stone is thrown at a fruitless tree- high self esteem. at times insensitive comments crush us temporarily. but we bounce back as realisation dawns, nobody can take our sense of self worth from us. well expressed Nikunj 10 Mamta

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Christina Phan 21 July 2009

i agree with person wht they say who comment before me. sometimes we want something so bad we wait its gone but sometimes wait can be gd thing u never k fanatic job 10+++ kept it up

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i love it especially the ending part...the realization portion...we all come at a time in our lives when we realize things..somethimes too late...and sometimes, just in time to make things happen the way we want it to be.

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