Saturday, September 5, 2020

পূজা/Worship Comments

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পূজা


হৃদয় মাঝে পূজিব তোমায়
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Srijita Mondal
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2020

HAS PG NOT APPROVED YET

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2020

Edit REQUEST SHOW PG FIRST I am not much into this kind of subject. (cut out extraneous words) WORSHIP CONTD PT2. my senses expand what if these remain inherent and dormant with the soft touch of Your light let my eyes widen bright enough

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2020

Edit REQUEST SHOW PG FIRST I am not much into this kind of subject. (cut out extraneous words) WORSHIP Contained in my heart’s altar I shall worship you offering garlands of my breath come present yourself to me with the light of your soul remove all darkness and illusions show me your light of your very Being let all shadows of ignorance flee from my heart’s garden occupied as you reside without slightest interval as your omniscience flashes CONTD

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 September 2020

very nice but needs edit.....my style will help if u say KINDNESS PG GOOD SPIRITUALISM COMING FROM YOU COMPOSE MORE IN ENGLISH FOR PH THANK U

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