Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, December 10, 2013

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There lies unknown fear
We all have to know and bear
It comes at each stage
Really worrisome for any age
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

good job Betty Roberts18 minutes ago Your work is well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Sad, true, and beautiful. Wayne P26 minutes ago This really teaches me that the lives my parents live are very stressful and they do anything they can to please me. A very touching poem. Thanks for the poem Hasmukh. Comment +1 very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Angelica Cortez33 minutes ago It's very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Sometimes children forget that parents give up so much for them and all too often do we realize it when it's too late. It's truly a gift to come to this realization when one is old enough to realize it is their turn to give back to their parents. A lovely piece, thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 December 2013

good write sir, I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

There lies unknown fear We all have to know and bear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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