Oh! ...the incertitude...
oscillating a to-and-fro
through the crepuscule of ambiguity...
through this worried mind,
...
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Outstanding write, I can relate to the agony of worrying and you have expressed with brilliant choice of words, your creativity is exploding like fireworks with a stunning display of worrying till madness! You create such intensity of the madness of worrying that is obsessive and drains our heart and souls of living, life is a dread a fear that consumes us like a deadly disease!
Most of us would prefer not to feel and hence not worry I can feel the madness in your words the price you pay to feel and be alive. Beautifully written poem love the INTENSITY
So powerful a poem! Sometimes we feel that to be alive is to suffer! We do not know the reason for the agony and panic we go through. But we feel it is there, very much there! When no door opens before us, we feel imprisoned within our own afflictions. At such times we involuntarily long for a comatose which will render us numb to all agonizing pain and insensitive to all nagging thoughts!