Paul, this poem would be a lot better if you stopped forcing rhymes which result in clumsy lines (avails no solution to the fore) . Maybe stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry?
If you have time, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC
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Paul, this poem would be a lot better if you stopped forcing rhymes which result in clumsy lines (avails no solution to the fore) . Maybe stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry? If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC