Saturday, May 9, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

I made my way to her heart
fixed on her eyes
I stepped beside her
trying to get closer.
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Afzal Shauq
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Hike of adrenaline where exudating emotion…overrules…and you’ve done it nicely Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kelly Aragon 29 January 2010

A power of a women can be terrible. It's good not to underestimate us. For if you do, you won't escape. Loved it!

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Hanaa Art Nabil Rashed 19 October 2009

good work man that's the real power of women so how can you scape boy? ? ? real good

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Bele Lele 12 August 2009

Love the second stanza, good poem.

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Laila lili 29 June 2009

it is wonderful special the main feeling in it.... it is nice peace keep on your writing laila lili

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Afzal Shauq

Afzal Shauq

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