Monday, March 25, 2019

Worn Edges Of My Heart. Comments

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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Bryony Sheldon 30 March 2019

Another fantastic poem- (and though I'm not sure if it was intentional) I like what you did with the syllables, as if the poem were slowly wearing away. Thanks for sharing!

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C F 26 March 2019

What a romantic write! Just be careful, worn edges can easily get torn, then you'll be writing another poem about a jagged or broken heart.

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