Friday, June 9, 2006

Worms Comments

Rating: 4.8

Have you ever noticed,
That when it rains,
Or pours,
There are worms,
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Dee Daffodil
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Melvina Germain 10 March 2007

I love creative minds, many would ask 'who would think of a worm as subject for a poem', my answer to them 'only the greatest of poets would have such thoughts.' I think of you as a breathe of fresh air, allowing your mind to soar and then put pen to paper so we'll ask for even more of the lovely works of Dee Daffodil. Thankyou Dee---Melvina---

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Barry Van Allen 07 March 2007

Dee, Well, that was just fun! - - - This July, ask yourself how many bugs there would be in the world today without cars?

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Nalini Hebbar 14 July 2006

thank God you are DEE DAFFODIL! ! ! ...a flower not de worm...but found poetry in a worm? ...yuk...lol...nalini...5 for DEE + 5 for DE worm

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Francesca Johnson 05 July 2006

soggy skins........glued to the ground........I just love the way you phrased this one. A laugh / cry sort of poem.....interesting. Love, Fran xx

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David Darbyshire 22 June 2006

Yes big dew worms I know best for fishin, well have a nice wormy day dave xxx

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Chuck Audette 13 June 2006

Haha! I enjoyed the line about the sun baking the poor little buggers to gum. Good point about the li'l guys always showing up on the sidewalks.. hmmm.. -chuck

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Brian Dorn 11 June 2006

Dee, worm is only one letter removed from word... I wonder what Darwin would make of that? ? ? Good poem... interesting observations! ! Brian

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Ernestine Northover 09 June 2006

Me too! What a life, not knowing whether you are going forwards or backwards, and which end is which. Food for thought as well as for the birds! Great fun write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 09 June 2006

Your poetry is intact, and i hope that this one survives the critics storm Love Duncan x

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