Worm Comments

Heartiest Congratulations on Poem of the Day as also excellent ability to observe minutest detains and their reproduction in the form of a wonderful verse.10 points.

Excellent. Perfectly sketched scene and the closure was abrupt and painful. I remember as a child that when shoveling around in the dirt I sometimes cut a worm in half and was consoled by the thought that now there were two worms living there instead of just one. I hope that was true. What is true is that you have HUGE talent!

Deftly written. Very enjoyable

Inbetween with the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing.

An exquisite piece of writing! A worthy 10! Nicely done

powerful observations and a peculiar way of writing which is very much original. thank you. tony

And usually, when you cut a worm in half, both sides can keep on living. Not so with us people.

Experiments with nature. Thanks for sharing.