Worlds Word & Death At Childbirth Comments

thanks for sharing, its a nice wondering thought.

its dramatic representation creates a sense of solitude and if the root of entering the future is not clear to anybody, sense of death become obvious end of the story-telling. so, ultimately you have touched that oft-told catastrophe. after all you have tried to illustrate a shore beside infinity...carry on... Regards, Pranab

Thanks for inviting me to read your poem, which I liked very much. Images are rich and the subject is moving. Poets talking to us through time and after death is something worth writing about, specially when well done. Though your poem was totally different it reminded me of Brooke's Great Lover. I shall keep on reading you.

Abhay, the surrounding was creatively created...It's dark and give a good feeling to feel.. Honestly i read twice to get whole idea and understand the meaning beneath the poem and i enjoyed :) Thanks for inviting :) _Unwritten Soul

An interesting piece of poetry. this is very vivid, and holds a lot of detail. Thank you for the invitation.

Written well.a vivid imaginary magnanimous write.

It is a strange title, but i think i can see What your saying, you've put it across Very well in the poem. May i invite you To read my poem called, boy to a man.

Wow! fabulous beautifully written. U drew a pic. full of different colors and amazing imaginations. Beautiful poem 10+++++

a heart felt and sad poem some of it i understand so i know how you feel