Friday, September 14, 2018

Worldly Sin Comments

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Beside the lake, away from the sphere
They were sitting, in total silence
Just hands in hands and eyes in eyes
No hustle-bustle just in blithe
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deepak S S 22 July 2020

Weak human flesh is bound to commit sins The first rays of sun Forced them to cover the shame As if the body and the mind instigated And they committed a worldly sin

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 October 2018

Worldly sin! ! ! To cover the same. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2018

Round and round engrossed in love sweetness is surrounded in love. An amazing love poem is wonderfully presented.

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