Monday, November 30, 2009

World War Iii Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blasts like earthquakes, started at target points,
Spreading circularly with a combination of forceful winds and wild tremor, ripping-off roof tops and causing buildings to crumble,
like fired cannon-balls, humans succumbed to this force.
No bloodsheds, but a ginormous massacre of every living thing within its blast range.
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David Oluwatobi Akinola
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Ramin Chaman 18 December 2009

Hello David A very good poem and very well penned..well done...10+

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Maynard Tomain 16 December 2009

Very nice I read it again after wards keep this up.

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Marieta Maglas 04 December 2009

Survivors were few nice visionary poem 10

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Eyan Desir 30 November 2009

Interesting poem..... Good write...10

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David Oluwatobi Akinola

David Oluwatobi Akinola

Zaria, Kaduna State-Nigeria
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