Sunday, November 16, 2008

******world War Iii! Comments

Rating: 4.5

First world war
Resulted 40 million causalities
1914 to 1918
Died men women children teen.
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sarwar chowdhury
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Adnan Khan 30 October 2013

This is the worst poem I have ever read. Better than that you can read my poem The World War 5. it's superb. I hope you all will read my poems and please please give ratings and comments. Thank You. Adnan Khan

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 July 2010

‘Who are you? I wonder I wonder what's this Maya's net! '’ War…Poet …Readers…Poetry…Lovers…Love…Tears…are all in net of your ‘Poetic Maya’… … Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mimi Fakhira 18 August 2009

Nice one... eloquently penned. I totally enjoyed it! Read Skyland, by Sarah Ally, my friend and schoolmate.

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 August 2009

Beautiful imagination. Truely unbelievable. Amazing.

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Jason P. 16 August 2009

great poem explains the truth about love and lovers

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Siddharth Singh 15 August 2009

love, fights, war, boom, apologies! Wonderful. Deserves a 10.

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

this splendid.. i d say you are one of the greatest entertainers in the site! ! ! i see many have enjoyed this piece.. this so cool! ! ! .. hey by the way i recently played a video game about third world war! ! ! .. i loved last part.. with lots of love shan

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Ejaz Khan 19 July 2009

Most of the writers start writing about self and then develop it into a worldwide matter, you've succeeded doing the opposite, a nice write, well placed words and imagery, greetings!

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Indira Renganathan 10 July 2009

The pensive mood here is over shadowed by thundering laughters on wary love...a great piece

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Lily Law 24 February 2009

Love the twist in the poem... LOL.... Another great poem.. ^-^ 10++

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Shelby L 05 December 2008

Wow so true the biggest war out there is one between lovers. I would never step in between two. lol It may turn into a nuclear war. Good job Shelby 10+

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Monlano Kim 26 November 2008

WOW! WW3 is a fight between lovers! I can believe how devastating it can become. great job.

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Naru Kaede 26 November 2008

Hehehehe, , the most scary think is fight with your girlfriend? ? I can feel that, , fight with our lover is more dangerous than anything... Love this one! Hehehehe, , , I give you 10++ Naru Kaede, ,

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Sarah Sisson 26 November 2008

10 +++++. scary to think all of that!

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Sarah Abdullah 25 November 2008

Unique...and enjoyable Truely Well Done...

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foxy babii 24 November 2008

different but enjopyable good write

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 24 November 2008

Very interesting turns the poem makes! However, ultimately love triumphs. A different type of poem! Beautiful experiment.

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Viola Grey 23 November 2008

these are the sort of wars that should be waged...they can be healed with a word...thanks for leading me here, I enjoyed the read.

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Priya Arora 23 November 2008

over all the poem is good...concept is new so i like it and enjoyed it alot but best lines that i can say would be: -'Morning dews, burning sun, ocean's waves witness, You the 'you' I love most. At any cost Let me touch, love me much, o dear lovely princess

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Meggie Gultiano 23 November 2008

enjoyed reading this, my friend.Wonderful..I love the last few lines

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sarwar chowdhury

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Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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