World To End Comments

Good poem, you've got good verses, I just think it flows better like this: Our life is like clay pot Once broken then it can’t be restored It can be broken or made worthless on the spot We need to think more instead of it being deplored This is just my personal opinion though, I changed to be to being above to sound right... Good Job!

real nice rhymning best wishes

T A Ramesh Development of humanism, preservation of Nature and creation of one world will solve all!

Gloria Rodikis It's a lovely poem and I like all you philosophical pondering! 6 hours ago via mobile · Like

World to end I would never want the world to end Even if nature has turned against us with clear trend