World Poetry Forum Poem by DM W

World Poetry Forum

Rating: 4.5


A cacophony of incoherent voices;
Babbling, fevered egos;
Constant interruptions and
Problems with audio and video.
Is this really the global village
Many idealists dream of?
Or is just another
Badly organised token gesture? !

Sunday, November 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,satirical,technology
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 03 November 2020

Gee whizz! Talk about starting badly then quickly fading. Gremlins clearly despise poetry. Five most pitiful and dire stars. And good luck Dominic if there is another fingers crossed better organised event forum. And I've got to ask was there even a bar there to at least drown one's torment, resentment, frustrations and endless sorrows. Or is that wishful thinking along with unicorns.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

'Is this really the global village Many idealists dream of? Or is just another Badly organised token gesture? ' - The latter, perhaps!

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Dominic Windram 03 November 2020

Thanks Khairul..in the case I mention in my poem, yes unfortunately it was the latter! No doubt it was well - intended, but dreadfully executed. Perhaps it will be better next time. who knows?

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