Sunday, June 6, 2004

(world Peace) Comments

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When the time is right and everyone’s the same
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Kyle.J Carruthers
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Anong All 06 June 2004

(World Peace) ....To be honest.., this poem of yours'.., is very scary. The message, in which.., I did come upon.., Right off the bat, the title is trapped. Not, only once.., but twice. The third time.., WORLD PEACE.., felt more at ease.., WORLD.., seemed to be crying out for help. PEACE.., seemed to call furth. Your poem is indeed.., interesting. I hope.., the overall, message has goodness within.

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Kyle.J Carruthers

Kyle.J Carruthers

Orillia, Ontario, Canada
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