World On It's Knees Comments

War destroys while love builds...... So no sensible man longs for war! Love enables us to forgive and from forgiveness emanates peace! A great poem!

I think I mean I know the world is already... dead and on its knees in some parts of the planet...a breath of fresh air to read a poem that shouts out the subject...regards

who need war to end the world./ a good question seems no one has the answer

It's as real as it is and a sorry staye to be in

Fantastic! Seriously considering this being the song.

it's a very powerful poem.. i loved it. thank you

Thank you for speaking the words many dont find the will to speak. So many people think this but are so afraid they wont be listened to that they dont speak up. So thank you.

The last two lines are really powerful. Rather than money, man's heart is the root of all evil.

A really nice poem, a great ending indeed! Promise to read more of your poems in the near future

apt thoughts on the human condition, Dave

justice rules by injustice......thought-provoking poem! ! ! !

Sadly too true, powerful words, well written...thought provoking. -SG

I cannot resist telling you that you are more than good to go with equilibrium to deep layers beneath the meaning in a trial to emphasize the meaning itself in such a simple expressive fashion, really, nice going, nice being, nice coming, so thank you alot, a very friend of mine and a very brother PH.D: AHMED KHALED

Thank you for sharing your perspective. Whether begging for forgiveness or justice, we are on our knees...

your heart always thrust for a better world......great vision, dear friens

justice carved by compassion! good poem!

Very good i must say, i like it

Very Precise and intelligent work. I loved this piece. It was beautiful.

pin-pointed such a vague and slippery subject.and the ending leads into an eerie and haunting place.and a worthy read.

nice write. you have penned it well.a dropp of greed is casted out then things will be different may be........... hoping against all hope