Friday, July 10, 2009

World On Fire. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fire is blazing inside me,
while it's so calm outside.
There are things i want to do.
I want to stop the water from flowing.
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siddharth singh.
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Sandra Fowler 18 April 2010

Very passionate feelings expressed here. You have a flair for drama. Excellent. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 24 October 2009

nicely expressed ur inner feelings, good one10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

Excellent imagination. Wow! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Indira Renganathan 07 October 2009

It is wrath...more than anger...well done

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

the anger inside is very nicely expressed....

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Monica Singh 11 September 2009

how nicely through usage of few words u have brought out ur anger for this world. very unlikely u.u do magic with words. luv u.

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 August 2009

a burning expression of feelings... a piece of honesty...a piece of reality a piece of being human a worth-reflecting piece 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2009

Fine wording to depict the universal fact! 10+

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Krishna Bothra 19 August 2009

this poem is typical u its written with lot of conviction...............as usual

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Priyanka Bhowmick 19 July 2009

ur heart seems to b bursting for these desires... not only urs all of us esp. whn frustrated of the inhumane souls... a good write.. keep it up.

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Lynda Robson 15 July 2009

An honest write, watch the fire doesn't go out, 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2009

nice a fire within you and you wanna to do so many things then why you wanna fall down and not rise again? so, dont fall down rise and up again let the earth catch your fire -10 anjali

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Piyush Sharma 10 July 2009

Wow. All your poems are so full of truth. I like your candid expression about the real nature of man. We all are like that. when the fire is within us, we just want to expel it from us on this world (the world which is a source of our own creation) . The character in your poem kind of gets relaxed when he has given off the fire to its very own source, its own originator, its own mother. You have very nicely exposed the basic nature of man i.e selfishness. An excellent work. Wow. Now u get a tenner

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