World On Fire. Comments

Very passionate feelings expressed here. You have a flair for drama. Excellent. Warm regards, Sandra

nicely expressed ur inner feelings, good one10+

Excellent imagination. Wow! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

It is wrath...more than anger...well done

the anger inside is very nicely expressed....

how nicely through usage of few words u have brought out ur anger for this world. very unlikely u.u do magic with words. luv u.

a burning expression of feelings... a piece of honesty...a piece of reality a piece of being human a worth-reflecting piece 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

Fine wording to depict the universal fact! 10+

this poem is typical u its written with lot of conviction...............as usual

ur heart seems to b bursting for these desires... not only urs all of us esp. whn frustrated of the inhumane souls... a good write.. keep it up.

An honest write, watch the fire doesn't go out, 10 Lynda xx

nice a fire within you and you wanna to do so many things then why you wanna fall down and not rise again? so, dont fall down rise and up again let the earth catch your fire -10 anjali

Wow. All your poems are so full of truth. I like your candid expression about the real nature of man. We all are like that. when the fire is within us, we just want to expel it from us on this world (the world which is a source of our own creation) . The character in your poem kind of gets relaxed when he has given off the fire to its very own source, its own originator, its own mother. You have very nicely exposed the basic nature of man i.e selfishness. An excellent work. Wow. Now u get a tenner