A fire is blazing inside me,
while it's so calm outside.
There are things i want to do.
I want to stop the water from flowing.
I want to stop the wind from blowing.
I want my mind to stop from doing the thinking.
I want to put this world on fire
and watch everything around me burn.
Then i want to laugh, laugh aloud
because the fire now blazes outside
while it's so calm inside me.
Then i want to fall down,
never to rise again.
' copyright 2009 siddharth singh.'
a burning expression of feelings... a piece of honesty...a piece of reality a piece of being human a worth-reflecting piece 10+++ Lovelots, Maia
this poem is typical u its written with lot of conviction...............as usual
ur heart seems to b bursting for these desires... not only urs all of us esp. whn frustrated of the inhumane souls... a good write.. keep it up.
Very passionate feelings expressed here. You have a flair for drama. Excellent. Warm regards, Sandra
Excellent imagination. Wow! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
how nicely through usage of few words u have brought out ur anger for this world. very unlikely u.u do magic with words. luv u.