World On Fire. Poem by siddharth singh.

World On Fire.

Rating: 5.0


A fire is blazing inside me,
while it's so calm outside.
There are things i want to do.
I want to stop the water from flowing.
I want to stop the wind from blowing.
I want my mind to stop from doing the thinking.
I want to put this world on fire
and watch everything around me burn.
Then i want to laugh, laugh aloud
because the fire now blazes outside
while it's so calm inside me.
Then i want to fall down,
never to rise again.


' copyright 2009 siddharth singh.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monica Singh 11 September 2009

how nicely through usage of few words u have brought out ur anger for this world. very unlikely u.u do magic with words. luv u.

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 August 2009

a burning expression of feelings... a piece of honesty...a piece of reality a piece of being human a worth-reflecting piece 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2009

Fine wording to depict the universal fact! 10+

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Krishna Bothra 19 August 2009

this poem is typical u its written with lot of conviction...............as usual

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Priyanka Bhowmick 19 July 2009

ur heart seems to b bursting for these desires... not only urs all of us esp. whn frustrated of the inhumane souls... a good write.. keep it up.

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Sandra Fowler 18 April 2010

Very passionate feelings expressed here. You have a flair for drama. Excellent. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 24 October 2009

nicely expressed ur inner feelings, good one10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

Excellent imagination. Wow! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Indira Renganathan 07 October 2009

It is wrath...more than anger...well done

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

the anger inside is very nicely expressed....

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siddharth singh.

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Jaipur, India.
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