Friday, December 30, 2011

World Of Greed Comments

Rating: 4.3

Subliminal messages
in a world of greed
They start you young
To sow the seed
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Dave Alan Walker
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Nkosilathi Zinyane 30 September 2019

very strong poem...very enjoyable

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Scott Federman 22 October 2016

Short and to the point.

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Heather Wilkins 07 August 2013

this is a great question and I feel the answer is no. a good read

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Johnathan Juarez 16 May 2012

you ask great questions in your poetry

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Lawrence H 13 January 2012

Wow, wow, Dave Walker, Very well structure, easy to read and very short-lined poem. Just how truth is the world full of greedy people... Therefore, we have many wars, country boundary, patriotism spirit to split and destroy human race. I think we should go back to the basic especially religion teaching and some Buddhism Karma practice to avoid greed and selfish. I rated this poem 10/10..Well Done, Dave....

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lottie Harris 30 December 2011

i like it, it makes sense which ithink is kinda rare :)

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Eric Cockrell 30 December 2011

greed and apathy, the two diseases that would destroy humanity!

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Glenn Gay 30 December 2011

I like your poetry I particularly like World of greed, I think it describes today's world perfectly.

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Vipins Puthooran 30 December 2011

Root out the seeds of greed/ a good poem! !

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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