Sunday, October 12, 2008

)))))))))))))) World Lost Into Crowd ((((((((((((((( Comments

Rating: 2.7

Oh dear friend wait a bit onto the dusk
Life has never forsaken your dream
sun stoops over heads bristling warmth
earth is least hurried high by your desire
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Dr subhendu kar
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very well put great poem

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Seema Chowdhury 27 October 2008

such a lovely composition, full of desires and hopes. very inspiring wordings. i hope you will find what you are looking for. take care

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 October 2008

oh, what a piece.! such an inspiration for anybody to be patient in in acquiring their dreams. It touches me a lot...your piece is very meaningful to me...enough to bring down tears down my cheeks but with a smile...it will definitely serve as an inspiration to anybody....who dreams of fulfillment in life...a 10+ for this very beautiful and inspiring piece. God bless you...always

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Anjali Sinha 25 October 2008

hey Shub, really a lovely piece -we are a lost world into that crowd of doubts and hates +++++++++10 and A+++ dear fren, regards anju

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

LOTS OF TRUTHFUL EMOTIONS THERE... A REALLY NICE PIECE...

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Thomas Kurkoski 15 October 2008

An absolutely brilliant piece full of truth and emotion. It doesn't get much better than that! Cheers, Thomas K

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Thad Wilk 12 October 2008

A sad poem, written masterfully! Thank you for sharing Dr Kar! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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C T Heart 12 October 2008

heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow --- Lovely lines, i loved them so much for it is such a beautiful piece to share forth...a 10.

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