Thursday, September 26, 2019

World Is Good Nor Yet Bad Comments

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Fate frowns at us— faltering souls for sins
Much as mother may reprimand her child,
Some call it a law of karma that leans,
To others good and bad are views so wild,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 29 September 2019

A splendid write...second stanza answers very well and the concluding lines are superb...'To me this world is good nor yet is bad, As no man joyous be if never sad.'...yes, this is the only possible conclusion that we can arrive at...an interesting poem on Maya ' '

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Anjandev Roy 27 September 2019

Excellent piece. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 September 2019

Thank you dear Anjandev Roy for reading this poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2019

Illusion or May pulls a person towards greediness, attachment and other evil thoughts. But Goodness transcends Maya's illusive hood. You have rightly said about it in this poem. A beautiful poem on evil and good has been astutely presented here with poet's note. Thank you dear Pathak sir for the sharing of this poem here.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 September 2019

Thanks for liking it dear KM

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