World In Slumber Comments

Very thought provoking.

As your first attempt at writing poems in English, this is indeed remarkable! When we see the disparities among human beings, we tend to ask the same question at the end of the poem to our Creator, though much of the disparities are man made! Seeing so many, leading a subhuman life in impoverished and unhygienic surroundings, any sensitive soul will be moved to tears! A powerful and poignant write!