Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, November 21, 2013

World Changes Fast Comments

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So do the seasons last?
Desert witnesses snow fall
Rivers spate with sudden call
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

modern day Samantha39 minutes ago I love that at first you come off as if you are disturbed by the world, but at the end you portray a more humble and accepting view of the world. Great poem. Comment +1 Interesting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Matthew Main41 minutes ago Different. Comment +1 Serious

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Corrie Diamond35 minutes ago I think of poetry as someone's feelings. It seems really serious. Really good though. Comment +1 nice message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Robin Little39 minutes ago but meter made it fall short for me ~ think to add extra beat.. I think.. perhaps as experiment.. to flesh it out.. my opinion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2013

Peach There is a lot to think about in each stanza, many conclusions to be drawn.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2013

its very good Walrus B30 minutes ago thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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