So do the seasons last?
Desert witnesses snow fall
Rivers spate with sudden call
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Matthew Main41 minutes ago Different. Comment +1 Serious
Corrie Diamond35 minutes ago I think of poetry as someone's feelings. It seems really serious. Really good though. Comment +1 nice message
Robin Little39 minutes ago but meter made it fall short for me ~ think to add extra beat.. I think.. perhaps as experiment.. to flesh it out.. my opinion
Peach There is a lot to think about in each stanza, many conclusions to be drawn.
its very good Walrus B30 minutes ago thanks for sharing
modern day Samantha39 minutes ago I love that at first you come off as if you are disturbed by the world, but at the end you portray a more humble and accepting view of the world. Great poem. Comment +1 Interesting