Thursday, March 24, 2016

World And Life Comments

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Life is an art, draw it and see
World is a miracle, explore it and see
Mind is an oracle, think it and see
Body is a machine, oil it and see.
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Thilagavathy Swamy
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 March 2016

lots of hidden details in this poem! Thank you for sharing!

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Thank you so much for reviewing this poem. Keep reviewing all my poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

World is a miracle! ! Nice piece of work.

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Thank you so much sir.

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True life is an art need to draw and see-superb.

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Thank you mr.singh.

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Life is an art draw it and see-a nice expression.

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Sridevi Thirunavukkarasu 24 March 2016

what a rhyming, philosophy and emotional touch.super

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Thank u sri. Please review all my poems periodically and pass your valuable comments.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2016

Men may go and Men may come Women may come and Women may run Child may laugh and Child may grow Knowledge will come and always grow......... very rhythmic. and ending super...... beautiful writing. tony

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Thank you very much for your sincere comments Dr. Please keep reviewing my poems and pass comment and vote. I will also review your poems

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 24 March 2016

fantastic philosophy

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My approach on World, Life and knowledge is expressed

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