Wednesday, April 23, 2014

World A Battlefield Comments

Rating: 0.0

Sun shine in an apparent way
It’s so pleasant and quiet all way
In a Sudden wash off that spread around
Fire that stretch to the sun so high
...
Read full text

SALINI NAIR
COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2014

What all war sows are some monuments Tears that mixed with blood Only hatred that reside For single, a single rise and its fall! ! ! A nice thought in a well written poem.

0 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 29 April 2014

Calling the world as a stage, as an examination hall, a playground, a circus...or a battlefield signifies the poet's vision or angle with which he/she tries to philosophies life...this one is a strong aspect too that is undeniable...a battlefield with a grim war between the man and the deadly sins is going on, or we experience a daily armageddon waged...thank you salini nair for your poetry!

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 23 April 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. This world is really a battlefield. Hatred resides here. If instead of this, if everyone followed peace, this world could have the beautiful place to live in. Loved it.

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 23 April 2014

This world is a battlefield where we are fated to wage an eternal war... Many get killed, many are orphaned, some become martyrs.... No doubt all wars originate out of hatred.... If we dismiss hatred from our minds, this world would be made a place of peace... A replica of heaven..! ! . A great write Salini!

0 0 Reply
SALINI NAIR

SALINI NAIR

kottayam
Close
Error Success