Sunday, October 7, 2007

World Comments

Rating: 5.0

world let the people breath
let them have the strength to live
to live their life without difficulty
let the sun shine down onto the people
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Sarah Nugent
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Poison 9901 07 October 2007

Very nice Sarah, and very well written. I especially like the verse that states 'let love take flight on young lovers who have yet to learn by their mistakes' Life is full of mistakes, the only thing that we can hope for is that we learn from them. Again, very well written and stated as if to be a prayer. I give you a 10 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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