Thursday, August 30, 2007

World Comments

Rating: 5.0

as i lay down to sleep
my wounds would begin to bleed
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Donald Edwards
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Violet Llewellyn 04 September 2007

I hate to be blunt, but this is the only poem of yours (as there are 8) that I thought was good. Tear me down if you wish... -Storm

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