Thursday, May 24, 2007

World Comments

Rating: 5.0

World, don't pin me down,
Put no weight on me,
Let not those stressing problems,
Usher in such agony.
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 24 May 2007

A stunning piece of work is set before us here, I would vote this a huge ten and an even bigger smile, I also loved the style in-which it was written Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2007

Ernestine, an appealing plea from a charming poet with an optimistic spirit and a graceful pen. love, Allie xxxx

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Francesca Johnson 24 May 2007

Nothing could steal YOUR smile, Ernestine. I can feel it from here! Lovely writing, as always. Love, Fran xxx

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