Friday, June 29, 2007

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I did not feel fear when
pain grabbed me by the chest
shook air out of my lungs,
triggered the sluice gates of my pores
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Original Unknown Girl 05 February 2008

Brilliant poem, title is fun too! Great piece about feeling unwell and how the body manages to relay those messages to the brain. HG: -) xx

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C.R. Clark 04 February 2008

I enjoyed reading this poem very much. It is very descriptive, detailed, and yet easy to follow. You have a real talent. Thank you

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