Monday, February 9, 2009

Working For The Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

up before light
down after night
stop thinking
start working
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Joseph Poewhit 10 February 2009

You know many chase the carrot on the stick and die frustrated.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

All this hard working for the love of money.... A very true count of daily life. A simple but sharp and realistic poem with a bit satire as well. Good work, shannon. Good rhymes and stanzas. Keep it up! Best Wishes. Naseer

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