Working Bee Comments

four years later and i'm about to put this into my/our July 2017's 'showcase for and by PH poets'. it is a monthly display i put together of poems i've liked on PH, mostly written by PH friends and found in MyPoemList. this month i'm featuring poems by male poets, except one female i left out inadvertently in June, when i was using poems by females. any questions? just ask. all poets get recognized as the authors of the poems i use and, this month for the first time, i now direct readers to go to the poem's PH link. so maybe some new readers will come your way. bri :) thanks p.s. NOW you can edit the response you made to my first comment. do you have a spare apostrophe you could use? ha ha.

thanks... its edited

wow! another truly grabbing poem. i like the use of bee-things to tell your story of love. i'll put this in my poemlist and you in my poetlist. have you tried to set this to music; i read you are a musician. my only suggestion is checking the spelling of......swam (sic) , which i believe you mean to be swarm. thanks for sharing.