Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Workin To Get By... And Keep What We'Ve Got! Comments

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We work hard and we're proud of what we've achieved
The struggles worthwhile, but it's hard to believe
For every step forward, there's another step back
A dollar been saved, another bill on the stack
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Kathleen West
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Adeline Foster 01 November 2012

The sentiment in this one is very apro-pro. Read mine – Legacy – Adeline

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Saadat Tahir 17 July 2012

The pride that we feel at the end of the day On a job well done, and a good days pay Is it's own reward in it's own way Do the best you can, and come what may fable like and smooth as a..........well smoothie! the colloquial style adds so much charm and a touch of here and now! loved reading it...did u make it to the charts...should have i guess.. :) blessings

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Mark Dillon 10 July 2012

AMEN TO THAT, SOLID.YA'LL SING ALONG NOW.

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And melodious indeed this smoothly structured lyrical jewel be...Cadence is like dropping silk o'er satin. The title says it all...and the work/composition should be FED-EX'd overnight to the White House! Hopefully, the occupants are home and not ensconcing in yet their 16th vacation since January of 2009! lol! Solid workmanship all around...~FjR~

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