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And finally a poetry is born, it goes through many processes and finally after passing all the test it appears, shining like stars, dancing like daffodils...Excellent poem, a perfect 10 for this.

A very intelligent poem with a pleasingly modern structure. my son-in-law is a Wexford fellah, though the family originated in Cork. Your poem has real meaning and it's going in my favourites' list.

'unaware that shaping, molding over time' until the last 'the poems have shaped the poet i set out to write poetry but I have been written.' I adored 10+++