Monday, April 30, 2012

Work In Preygress Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our knots gnawed by that garish aged rat
Time
Frayed edges fall on pastures
To be chewed as fodder
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Danny Draper 02 May 2012

I don't fully get it but I still like the language and flow and structure and the bits I did get. That is the personal power of a poetic rant. It essentially is personal. Thanks for sharing, maintain the rage! We're the 2 words love and you. Please tell me I got it?

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