Work For The Night Is Coming Comments

Love this poem, and the collage is fabulous. I am fascinated by the intricacies of living things, so this work really speaks to me. Thank you! :)

Lovely poem you got there, you made the unsignificant significant by you intricate use of words, thanks for sharing

Interesting poem. Enjoyed.

Respect to nature! With the muse of the bees. Thanks for sharing.

But cease your life's work Ms. Worker Bee And the world might retreat to the edge of the sea, Revolve to the beat of stingray's tails and jellyfish swales... is very nice. Loved it.

This poem is part of an original painting/collage viewable at Pinterest, under my name, and Marianne's Art Board. I use many of my poems in my art.

Workers of the world unite Before the nectar-laden world takes flight...Very thoughtful composition that amazes mind. This poem gives wonderful thrilling on reading this. Very wisely penned poem shared.10

Amazing! You take the largest possible subject matter and treat it with the intimacy of a family gathering Your poem illustrates the perfervid quality of life, how can its maintainence not be an intense struggle It'sthe Ouroborus biting its own tail; it's T.S.Eliot telling us IN MY END IS MY BEGINNING and WE MUST ALL BE VOYAGERS.

Wow. This is a beautiful, thoughtful, well crafted poem. I was lost in it for a moment... Doesn't happen too often. I really enjoy the way you write. I look forward to reading more of your work. The opening stanza had me captured in your verse. I couldn't wait to see what would happen next... What workers... The bees! Oh so important....so many ways to bring our short time on earth to an end, but your sweet poem, belies the danger. Thanks for sharing this!

Our world turns lonely in this vast universe Homo-sapiens but a dot in Time's bio-diverse Of creatures large and small. liked these lines very much. worker bee and the world of the bees and the dependence of the humans. thought provoking poem. a new vision. thank you very much. tony

Marvelous poem, Marianne. Truth wrapped in lovely writing