Monday, December 3, 2018

Work Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dusk after hard working, the dawn after a sweet dream,
Work, work and work, sweats may take some time to come
Take the work as a play; enjoy it as a cone of sweet ice cream
Play more and more until pearls make you a pink handsome,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

wisely written- work is a game, and life is a wonderful play /// beautiful poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

Beautifully, wonderfully, brilliantly and lovingly penned. Loved this write. Just simply amazing.100000000000000 and on to my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

One of the best inspirational and motivational poems I have ever read. The words that have been woven in this magnificent write are stupendous. So many cluster of gems hanging in the body of this poem glittering for your grandson to see and imbibe in his mind forming as words of wisdom like stars guiding him through the path of life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

Work hard, work is a game, and life is a wonderful play The sun is also working with you, watch the growing day, The fogs will disappear you'll see how clear is the way......so touching and impressive with a nice theme. It is a beautiful poem and fine message to your grandson. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 December 2018

Work is play and play is life, three in one and one in three. A great poem.

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Savita Tyagi 04 December 2018

Pleasure of works is its own reward. So truely expressed Akhtarji.

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Kostas Lagos 04 December 2018

Tremendous poem Akhtar!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2018

SIR You are our master may Allah bless you with a khitabh Poet Laurette INSHAH ALLAH!

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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2018

Take the work as a play; enjoy it as a cone of sweet ice cream Play more and more until pearls make you a pink handsome, The drops of sweats on foreheads are the writers of fate Be punctual, follow the right time, and never be too late. - - - - - A very positive poem about the value of hard labour.A work done with zeal and happiness like a play will bring good fate.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem.

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Susheela Shiju 03 December 2018

so beautifully you penned it dear Sir! 10

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