Monday, August 13, 2018

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Rating: 4.8

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I woke up in the delightful morning,
With so much aspirations and hopes,
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Egbebi Mariam
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Chinedu Dike 22 January 2020

An insightful poetry with heartfelt rendition of words, powerfully and movingly penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Mariam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2019

I like how you ended the poem. And the penultimate stanza conveys a very optimistic view on work and life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2019

A wonderful poem that touches on the realities of life especially on the life of an employee or even an employer. We all need to work to sustain the basic necessities of life. Like you, I have been working since Day 1, right after.graduation and the feelings you are going through are also what I usually feel.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 August 2018

Write comment. A positive piece, Egbebi. An optimist poetess is peeping through the lines. Read my ars poetica, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2018

The love people will give or show to me, The moral that I will learn, The playful play I will see which will entertain me.. a fine message through this poem....... love what you do, love your work and that itself is a cause for joy.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Aj Anwar 15 August 2018

It's a big help if you love your work. A motivational poem, Egbebi Mariam, and welcome to PH.

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 August 2018

Of course, we have to love our work. Good writing. Thanks for sharing it

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Pallab Chaudhury 14 August 2018

Welcome to PH family! Nice start. Work means an opportunity to prove one's excellency... With best wishes.

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