Work
I woke up in the delightful morning,
With so much aspirations and hopes,
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I like how you ended the poem. And the penultimate stanza conveys a very optimistic view on work and life.
A wonderful poem that touches on the realities of life especially on the life of an employee or even an employer. We all need to work to sustain the basic necessities of life. Like you, I have been working since Day 1, right after.graduation and the feelings you are going through are also what I usually feel.
Write comment. A positive piece, Egbebi. An optimist poetess is peeping through the lines. Read my ars poetica, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks.
The love people will give or show to me, The moral that I will learn, The playful play I will see which will entertain me.. a fine message through this poem....... love what you do, love your work and that itself is a cause for joy.. thank u dear poetess. tony
It's a big help if you love your work. A motivational poem, Egbebi Mariam, and welcome to PH.
Of course, we have to love our work. Good writing. Thanks for sharing it
Welcome to PH family! Nice start. Work means an opportunity to prove one's excellency... With best wishes.
An insightful poetry with heartfelt rendition of words, powerfully and movingly penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Mariam.