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All depends on what type of work you are doing. it's hard if you have no skills in what you are trying to accomplish.

This is too didactic, something you should avoid as a poet. It attempts to preach to the listener instead of letting the listener discover some magic the poet reveals. You must learn to develop your poetic voice. Remember also, it is quality over quantity. I would rather write one powerful poem than a hundred weak ones.

The last stanza is the best! Thank you for the inspiring poem!

thank you for reading nd commenting!

Thank you for reading and nice comment!

For work if done willingly And with interest that persist Then it will be the only solution To obtain a meaningful and fruitful life ---- well penned in vividness...nice theme! ! !